Re: Pali Day by Day 4/17/2004 [A349]

Dear John, Gunnar and friends,

thanks for the corrections and suggestions. I have make the updates
which will later be uploaded online.

metta,
Yong Peng

--- In Pali@yahoogroups.com, Gunnar Gällmo wrote:
--- John Kelly <palistudent@...> skrev:

> Also, I would suggest the following as a slightly
> more flowing translation:
> On seeing the serpent entering the house, the girl
> was frightened and, shedding tears, began to cry.

Or even more straightforward:

"... was frightened and began to weep and cry."