Re: Another story

> You've got three problems here:
>
> 1) I suspect unattested vocabulary.
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> 2) Highly idiomatic expressions, which have probably not survived.
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> 3) I suspect people may not be keen on your story line.
>
> If no-one takes an interest, I suggest you drop this thread. It's
> border-line suitable - none of the other moderators rejected or
> approved this or its companion posting, and I nearly rejected it.
>
> Richard.

Okay. Thanks for telling.

For the record, the story was supposed to end with the Finno-Ugrian
saying something enlightened, proving him not to be an uneducated
savage. The story is a commentary on the erronious idea of
Indo-European supremacy. I'd NEVER put down other cultures for their
beliefs or ways of life. Just want to clear that up.