Dear Piya Tan;

Thanks for the hints:

1. mahaaphaasukapassen a -- (lie down) on his side in great comfort
2. uccaarapassaava. m -- defaecating and urinating
3. khe.lakilinna. m -- dripping in sweat (sometimes "drooling")
4. vaataggaha.nena -- holding his breath
5. he.t.thaanaasikasot ena -- with the lower nostril
6. uparimanaasikasoten a -- with the upper nostril
8. matakaakaara. m -- "make (himself) dead"
9. kaakaara.m dasseti -- looks like (he is) dead

My reformulation below.

In 5,6, for example: he.t.thaanaasikasotena
is it sotena = by ear ?
implying "the sound of" ?

And in 8,9 is it:
atakaakaara.m = mataka + kaara.m - make (himself) dead

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with metta,
Jon

1.
mahaaphaasukapassena - (lie down) on his side in great comfort
phaasu - comfort
phaasukara - comfortable
phaasuka - in comfort
aphaasuka - comfortless, without comfort

2.
uccaarapassaava.m - defecating and urinating
uccaara - faeces
passaava - urine

3.
khe.lakilinna.m - dripping in sweat, drooling in sweat
spittle - khela (m), laalaa (f)
kilinna - wet, humid

4.
vaataggaha.nena - holding his breath
vaata - (m) air, wind
gaha.na - hold, capture, seize

5, 6.
he.t.thaanaasikasotena - with the lower nostril
uparimanaasikasotena - with the upper nostril
he.t.thaa - down, under, underneath
naasikaa - nose
sota - (nt) ear

8,9.
matakaakaara.m = mataka + kaara.m - make (himself) dead
dasseti - show, pretend


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Jaataka 16: Tipallatthamiga Jataka -
young stag caught in net feigns his death to escape

so pi migapotako paase baddho avipphanditvaa
yeva bhuumiya.m mahaaphaasukapassena paade pasaaretvaa nipanno
paadaana.m aasanna.t.thaane khureh 'eva paharitvaa
pa.msu ca ti.naani ca uppaa.tetvaa,
uccaarapassaava.m vissajjetvaa,
siisa.m paatetvaa
jivha.m ninnaametva
sariira.m khe.lakilinna.m katvaa
vaataggaha.nena udara.m uddhumaataka.m katvaa
akkhiini parivattetvaa
he.t.thaanaasikasotena vaata.m sa~ncaraapento
uparimanaasikasotena vaata.m sannirumhitvaa
sakalasariira.m thaddhabhaava.m gaahaapetvaa
matakaakaara.m dassesi

The young antelope bound by a noose,
without trying to break loose,
lying on its side on the ground,
its legs outstretched,
was kicking its hoofs,
trampling the dust and the weeds, defecating, its head down, its
tongue out,
sweat all over its body,
its belly swollen,
tears rolling from its eyes,
letting out its breath through the lower nostril
and keeping it in by the upper nostril,
its body having become rigid,
pretended to be dead.

With metta
Jon Fernquest

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Tipallatthamiga - deer anxious for training ?

so pi migapotako paase baddho avipphanditvaa
The young antelope bound by a noose, without trying to break loose,

miga - deer
potaka - (m) young one
paasa - (n) noose
baddho - bound (pp bandhati)
vipphandati - flounder, struggle, writhe, vibrate, fluctuate
avipphanditvaa - not trying to break loose or struggle

yeva bhuumiya.m mahaaphaasukapassena paade pasaaretvaa nipanno
lying on its side on the ground, its legs outstretched,

bhuumi - (m) ground
nipanna - lie (pp nipajjati)
pasaareti - (vt) outstretch
pasaarita - (pp) outstretch
paade pasaaretvaa - legs outstretched
phaasukaa - (f) rib
mahaaphaasukapassena - on its side ?

paadaana.m aasanna.t.thaane khureh 'eva paharitvaa
was kicking its hoofs,

paada - (m) leg
aasanna.t.thaana - (nt) reach
khura - (n) hoof
paadena paharati - (vt) kick

pa.msu ca ti.naani ca uppaa.tetvaa,
trampling the dust and the weeds,

pa.msu - (nt) soil, dust
ti.na - (n) grass, weeds
uppaa.tetvaa - trample ?
uppatita - caper, fly, jump

uccaarapassaava.m vissajjetvaa,
defecating,

vissajjeti - let loose, answer, fling, hurl, spend, vacate, send off,
reply
[visati - to enter, -visitvaa (grd), -vissa (grd),visitu.m (inf)]
uccaara.m ossajati - (vi) stool

siisa.m paatetvaa
its head down

siisa - (n) head
opaateti - lower
paateti - drop, fell, pitch, throw

jivha.m ninnaametva
its tongue out

jivhaa - (n) tongue
ninnimitta casual

sariira.m khe.lakilinna.m katvaa
sweat all over its body

khe.lakilinna.m katva - sweat?
sariira - (m) body

vaataggaha.nena udara.m uddhumaataka.m katvaa
its belly inflated (swollen)

udara - (n) belly
uddhumaata - swollen
vaataggaha.nena - ?
vaatagatika - aeriform ?

akkhiini parivattetvaa
tears rolling from its eyes

akkhi - (n) eye
parivattati - roll

he.t.thaanaasikasotena vaata.m sa~ncaraapento
letting out its breath through the lower nostril

he.t.thaanaasikasotena - through its lower nostril
naasaa - (f) nose
vaata - (m) air, wind
sa~ncaraapento - letting out ?
sa~ncarati - move about, pass, walk

uparimanaasikasotena vaata.m sannirumhitvaa
and keeping it in by the upper nostril

uparimanaasikasotena - by the upper nostril
upari - upper
sannirumhitvaa - kept in
sannirumbheti - impede, restrain

sakalasariira.m thaddhabhaava.m gaahaapetvaa
its body having become rigid

thaddha - hard, tough, rigid
sakala - all, full, total, whole

matakaakaara.m dassesi
pretended to be dead

mata - dead
dasseti - pretend
kaakaara.m dasseti - ?

In: The Pali language by T.Y. Elizarenkova, V.N. Toporov, Nauka Pub.
House, Moscow, 1976, pages

125-126.