Dear friends,

I have come up with a rhythming version of the beautiful stanza:

The Embarkment Stanza:

The doctrine of an immeasurable breadth,
the encounter in countless eons rare;
I witness, I profess, it now and here,
upon I vow to comprehend Thy Teachings clear.


metta,
Yong Peng

--- In Pali@yahoogroups.com, Ong Yong Peng wrote:
> The Embarkment Stanza:
>
> A doctrine of boundless wisdom,
> a rare encounter in countless eons;
> I now witness the Tathagata's teachings,
> and vow to understand its profound meaning.
>
> --- In Pali@yahoogroups.com, Ong Yong Peng wrote:
> > The Embarkment Stanza:
> >
> > A doctrine of profound wisdom,
> > A chance of one in zillion eons;
> > An opportunity to practise upon hearing,
> > I vow to understand Thy Teachings.