Hi Laurel

I have indicated below where my translation differs slightly from yours. I would be interested in finding out if you agree with my alternative readings and parsing and if you could correct me if I am wrong anywhere.

Alysseann

Thanks!  I would say on the whole, these are accurate.  I don't have time to really look at this right now -- two job interviews this week! -- but I'll come back to it.  Thanks for the verb tenses.  I tend to guess, as I haven't really studied that yet.

Laurel