Dear Nina,
I have not read Piya's translation, but as usual I am happy to discuss any points brought up on the list.
metta,
Yong Peng.
--- In Pali@yahoogroups.com, Nina van Gorkom wrote:
a good idea to use this exercise, since it is available already. At the same time we can consult translations of Piya and others.
> John (Kelly) had previously covered this sutta in Lesson 12 of A
> New Course in Reading Pali. I suggest to use his translation as the
> basis for a group study. I am happy to participate in the discussion.
>
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Pali/message/6396