Dear Yow,
here is the second verse. Feel free to share your opinions.
"Siile-pati.t.thaaya naro sapa~n~no,
"Firm in morality, a man, wise,
citta.m pa~n~na~nca bhaavaya.m;
and cultivating the insightful mind;
aataapii nipako bhikkhu,
the ardent and prudent monk,
so ima.m vija.taye ja.tan"ti.
[he] would this tangle organize."
metta,
Yong Peng.
--- In Pali@yahoogroups.com, freeyow wrote:
Siilepati.t.thaaya naro sapa~n~no, citta.m pa~n~na~nca
bhaavaya.m;aataapii nipako bhikkhu, so ima.m vija.taye ja.tanti. (SN1.23)