Dear friends,

the commentary recommends the third line to be read as:

duure vivekaa hi tathaavidho so
in remote / from detachment / indeed / such like / he
In (allurement) remote from detachment, indeed, such he (is) like,

metta,
Yong Peng.

--- In Pali@yahoogroups.com, Ong Yong Peng wrote:

duure vivekaa hi tathaavidho so
in deep / from detachment / indeed / such like / he
In deep (allurement), from detachment, indeed, such he (is) like,