Dear Florent,

Thanks for keeping these series going. I spotted a couple of
corrections and suggested improvements:

> 1.Imesa.m dasanna.m dhanavantaana.m pañcamo sukha.m jiivati.
> [of] these / 10 / rich ones / fifth / comfortably / lives
> Out of these 10 riche ones the fifth lives comfortably.

Out of these 10 rich ones the fifth lives comfortably.

> 5.Imesu navasu sissesu sattamo saadhuka.m ugga.nhaati.
> these / 9 / students / seventh / well / learn
> Among these 9 students, the seventh learn well.

Among these 9 students, the seventh learns well.

> 6.Bhikkhuu Bhagavato santika.m aagantvaa ta.m vanditvaa ekamanta.m
> nisiidi.msu.
> monks / [to] Exalted One / slowly / having come / him / paid homage
> /on one side / sat down
> The monks came slowly to the Exalted One, paid homage to him and sat
> aside.

The monks came slowly to the Exalted One, paid homage to him and sat
to one side.

> 7.So se.t.thii (attano) dhana.m pañcadhaa vibhajitvaa pañcanna.m
> dhiitaraana.m adadi.
> this / millionaire / his own / wealth / in five ways / divided /

[to] five / daughters / gave

> This millionaire divided his wealth and gave it to his five daughters.

That millionaire divided his wealth in five parts and gave it to his
daughters.

> 9.Pa.thama.m te assaa ratha.m sama.m aaka.d.dhi.msu, dutiya.m siigha.m
> dhaavi.msu.
> at first / these / horses / carriage / evenly / drew / for the second
> time / quickly / ran
> At first these horses drew the carriage evenly, then for the second
> time they ran quickly.

At first those horses drew the carriage evenly, then secondly they ran
quickly.


With metta,
John