(I thought I posted this message before, but I can't find it on the Pali
group page so here it is again.)
I'm making a new bigger better chanting book for our monastery, I found this
nice udana I think I might like to use. There are some verses, and some
stanzas which are not in verse but I suspect are supposed to be. Here they
are:
*This is the part I suspect is supposed to be verse, I've rearranged the
lines so it looks like verse but the metre is so irregular its hardly a
metre. Any suggestions? Or am I barking up the wrong tree? *
"'Ye hi keci samaṇā vā brāhmaṇā vā
g l g l l l g g g l
g g 5 + 4.5 = 9.5
bhavena bhavassa vippamokkhamāhaṃsu,
l g l l g l g l l
l g g l 4 + 5 = 9
sabbe te avippamuttā bhavasmā-ti vadāmi.
g g g l g l g g l g g l
g l 7 + 4.5 = 11.5
'Ye vā pana keci samaṇā vā brāhmaṇā vā
g g l l g l l l g g g l g
g 6.5 + 4.5 = 11
vibhavena bhavassa nissaraṇamāhaṃsu,
l l g l l g l g l l l
g g l 4.5 + 5 = 9.5
sabbe te anissaṭā bhavasmā'ti vadāmi.
g g g l g l g l g g l
g l 6 + 4.5 = 10.5
"Upadhiñhi paṭicca dukkham-idaṃ sambhoti,
l l g l l g l g l
l g
g g 4.5 + 5 = 9.5
sabb'upādānakkhayā n'atthi dukkhassa sambhavo.
g l g g g l g g l g g l
g l g 6 + 6.5 = 12.5
Lokam-imaṃ passa; puthū avijjāya
g l l g g l l g l g g
l
4.5 + 4.5 =9
paretā bhūtā bhūta-ratā aparimuttā;
l g g g g g l l g l l l
g g 4.5 + 6.5 = 11
ye hi keci bhavā sabbadhi sabbatthatāya
g l g l g g g l l g g l g l
7 + 4 = 11
sabbe te bhavā aniccā dukkhā vipariṇāmadhammā-ti.
g g g l g l g g g g l l l g
l g g 7 + 7 = 14
"Evametaṃ yathābhūtaṃ, sammappaññāya passato;
g l g g l g g g g l g g
l g l g 7 + 7.5 = 11
bhavataṇhā pahīyati, vibhavaṃ nābhinandati.
l l g g l g l l l l g
g l g l l. 5.5 + 5.5 =11
*End of re-versifying attempt.** (This is where the text turns back to verse
in the CSCD, but I notice in John Ireland's trs. he puts the previous three
stanzas in verse, which is why I first wondered if the other stanzas above
were once verse.) *