Dear Nina and friends,

please amend the followings.


(1)

4. "A.t.thaanameta.m, bhikkhave, anavakaaso ya.m
kaayaduccaritasama`ngii tannidaanaa tappaccayaa kaayassa bhedaa
para.m mara.naa sugati.m sagga.m loka.m upapajjeyya.

This is impossible, monks, there is not a chance that a person living
with unwholesome physical acts, should be reborn in a happy state, a
heavenly realm, on the account of this very reason.


change to


This is impossible, monks, there is not a chance that a person living
with unwholesome physical acts, should be reborn in a happy state, a
heavenly realm, after the failure of the body and death, on the
account of this very reason.


(2)

.Thaana~nca kho eta.m, bhikkhave, vijjati ya.m
kaayaduccaritasama`ngii tannidaanaa tappacaayaa kaayassa bhedaa
para.m mara.naa apaaya.m duggati.m vinipaata.m niraya.m upapajjeyya.

But this is possible, monks, that a person living with unwholesome
physical acts would be reborn, on the account of this very reason, in
a state of woe, a realm of misery, a place of suffering, a purgatory.


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But this is possible, monks, that a person living with unwholesome
physical acts would be reborn, on the account of this very reason, in
a state of woe, a realm of misery, a place of suffering, a purgatory,
after the failure of the body and death.