Dear Florent,

> 9. Sikhii chattimhaa bhaayissati.
> peacock / [of] possessor of umbrella / will be afraid
> The peacock will be afraid of the possessor of umbrella.
The term "possessor of" sounds a little awkward in English. How about
instead:
The peacock will be afraid of the one bearing an umbrella.

Also note, that Buddhadatta rendering of chatta as "umbrella" may not
be entirely accurate.

Quoting from the PED:
Chatta (p. 274) (nt.) [late Vedic chattra=*chad--tra, covering to
chad, see chādati] a sunshade ("parasol" would be misleading. The
handle of a chatta is affixed at the circumference, not at the centre
as it is in a parasol), a canopy.

Se then:
The peacock will be afraid of the one bearing a sunshade.

> 11. Tumhe maaliihi sasina.m olokessatha.
> you / [with] possessors of garlands / moon / will look at
> You will look at the moon with the possessors of garlands.
This too sounds awkward to my ears. How about:
You will look at the moon with those wearing garlands.

With metta,
John
--- In Pali@yahoogroups.com, "flrobert2000" <flrobert2000@...> wrote:
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> 9. Sikhii chattimhaa bhaayissati.
> peacock / [of] possessor of umbrella / will be afraid
> The peacock will be afraid of the possessor of umbrella.
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> 10. Saarathii asse gaamamhaa harissati.
> charioteer / horses / [from] village / lead
> The charioteer will lead the horses from the village.
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> 11. Tumhe maaliihi sasina.m olokessatha.
> you / [with] possessors of garlands / moon / will look at
> You will look at the moon with the possessors of garlands.
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> 12. Balii daa.thino kaaya.m chindissati.
> Powerful person / [of] tusker / body / will cut
> The powerful person will cut the tusker's body.
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> 13. Amhaaka.m mantino balino abhavi.msu.
> our / ministers / powerful men / were
> Our ministers were powerful men.
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> 14. Se.t.thino maalino passissanti.
> millionaires / possessors of garlands / will see
> The millionaires will see those who have garlands.
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> 15. Maya.m gehe odana.m bhuñjissaama.
> we / [in] house / rice / will eat
> We will eat rice in the house.
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