At 8:13:41 PM on Tuesday, May 3, 2011, sveinnf wrote:

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> Og mannen han tenkte med sjølve seg,

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> Har du høyrt at ei kråke kan drepa en mann?"

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> Ok maðrinn hugsaði með sjálfr sik,

It can't be nominative <sjálfr> after <með>. I believe that
it wants the dative, <með sjálfum sér>.

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> Hefir þú heyrt at kráka getr drepinn mann?"

What about <má drepa mann>? It might be a little easier to
fit in.

I don't really feel competent to comment more generally, but
I did notice these.

Brian