Sorry, I'm so far behind.  Hope you don't mind if I post it this late.  Would like to keep doing it, though you've probably already answered any questions.  I'll check what you posted to the others before I hit send.... I still don't know verb tenses, so I'll just make it whatever seems to fit.
 
Laurel 

Boðvarr Bjarki  lines 20 – 29

Bơðvarr mælti  “Ekki muntu fá skjaldborgina lengr.”

BQðvarr - said - not - shall you - have/make use of - the shieldwall - longer

Bodvarr said, "You shall no longer have the shieldwall."

--------------------------------------------

Hơttr mælti ok grét “Skaltu nú bana mér, bokki sæll?”

HQttr - said - and - he wept - you shall/ought/must - now - kill - me - fellow - fortunate

Hood said, and he wept, "Will you kill me now, dear bucko?"

--------------------------------------------------

Bơðvarr bað hann ekki hafa hátt, tók hann upp síðan ok bar hann út ór hơllinni ok til vatns nơkkurs sem þar var í nánd, ok gáfu fáir at þessu gaum, ok þó hann upp allan.

BQðvarr - asked - him - not - to get - loud, seized - him - up - afterwards - and - bore - him - out - from - the hall - and - to - water/lake - a certain - which - there - was - in - proximity, and - gave - few - at - this - attention, and - washed - him - up - all the way.

Bodvarr commanded him not to make a scene, picked him up then and carried him out from the hall and to a certain lake which was there nearby, and few paid any attention to this, and cleaned him up thoroughly.

--------------------------------------------------- 

Síðan gekk Bơðvarr til þess rúms sem hann hafði áðr tekit, ok leiddi eptir sér Hơtt ok þar setr hann Hơtt hjá sér.

Afterwards - walked - BQðvarr - to - this - space/seat - which - he - had - before/first - taken, and - led - after/behind - himself - HQttr - and - there - placed/set - he - HQttr - beside - himself.

Then Bodvarr walked to the same seat which he had taken before, leading Hood behind him, and he sat Hood there beside him.

-----------------------------------------------

En hann er svá hræddr at skelfr á honum leggr ok liðr, en þó þykkisk hann skilja at þessi maðr vill hjálpa sér.

But - he - was - so - afraid - that - he trembled - in - his - bone - and - joint, but - nevertheless - seemed - he - to understand - about - this - man - intending - to help - himself

But he was so afraid that he trembled in every limb, but nevertheless he seemed to understand that this man wanted to help him.