Very good Sarah!

I only see one grammatical mistake.


"þaðan er kominn inn mesti kynþáttr Færeyinga"

> From there came most of the clan of the Faroese

The 'mesti' here means 'the greatest' rather than 'most of'.

"thence is come the greatest clan of the Faroese"

I might also point out that the nominative forms
'Ólöf' and 'Götuskeggjar' are the correct ones.

Hope you'll stay with us!

Kveðja,
Haukur