Thank you, Alan.  Re:

> Bróðurdóttir var hún Þórðar gellis en systurdóttir Þórólfs rauðnefs frá
> Sauðafelli.
> Thordar Gellis was a niece and niece of Thorolf Rednose's from
> Saudafell.
> [Alan] Note: Þórðar gellis is in the genitive form. The nominative form
> is Þórðr gellir
I see the translation should be more like:

She was a niece of T.G. and niece of Thorolf Rednose's from Saudafell.

Also, I see that Thordr is a male, so he cannot be the niece!

Rob


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> Rob
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> A few comments on your translation below
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> Cheers
> Alan
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> Hann var hraustur og vinsæll og var með Þorsteini mági sínum því að
> Þorsteinn var þá hniginn og þurfti umsýslu þeirra mjög.
> He was valiant and much-liked and was with Thorstein his in-law so that
> Thorstein was then beginning-to-decline and needed very-much their
> assistance.
> [Alan] því at = because (in most situations)
> Keypt hafði hann jörð þá er hann bjó á.
> He had bought land then where he lived. (Does "á" mean river here?)
> [Alan] á here is the preposition = on; þá here is not the adverb then
> but the feminine accusative form of the demonstrative pronoun sá = that;
> er here is relative particle = which, that rather than conjunction
> where.
> Bought – had- he – land- that – which –he – lived - on. This becomes "He
> bought that land on which he lived" in normal English syntax.
> Bróðurdóttir var hún Þórðar gellis en systurdóttir Þórólfs rauðnefs frá
> Sauðafelli.
> Thordar Gellis was a niece and niece of Thorolf Rednose's from
> Saudafell.
> [Alan] Note: Þórðar gellis is in the genitive form. The nominative form
> is Þórðr gellir
> Fleiri átti Þórður þræla þó að þessi sé einn nefndur.
> Thordr had several thralls although (? something about named). [From
> Alan's and Grace's translation I see that this was the only thrall who
> was named.]
> [Alan] sé is the 3rd person singular subjunctive form of the verb vera =
> to be; thus literally: "this-one be alone named.'
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